小作文: 动态图(柱状图)
大作文: Some people think the newly built houses should be the same as the old houses in local area. Others argue that local authorities should allow people to build houses in their own style. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
朗阁讲师点评
1.本次考试 难度中等。
2.整体分析:
Task 1:动态图(bar)条形图,对比美国1970和2010六个领域女性工作者的占比。
注意:1. 动态图要根据时间确定好时态,同时占比类数据要掌握对比对象与数据之间的关系。2.动态图避免只做动态描述,在恰当有关系的地方让两个对象产生横向对比。3.动态图要注意表达的多样性,上升下降等词汇要注意替换表达。相关表达:
占据(动词):account for/ occupy/take up/make up/constitute + 数%
比例(名词):share / distribution / percentage
In 1970, A accounted for +数据,while it increased sharply to +数据 in 2010.
A increased to +数据, which was the same as the figure of B in +时间
A +be动词+数据1,which +be动词+比较级+B(数据2)
A+***高级+with+数据+among all the +剩余对象
Task 2 :文化类
题目翻译:人们认为新建房屋应该和老房屋保持一致,而其他人认为政府应该允许人们修建个人风格的房屋。
改题目为双边讨论行题目,考生首先要避免单边写法,保持中立立场,对双方观点各自进行讨论,给出理由。其次该题型要注意在文章***后要体现个人想法,一般推荐在两个不同观点中找到平衡点的写法,或是体现让步转折的个人倾向。
有关题目两个大论点的素材,对于考生来说可能是个难点。新房屋和老房屋风格保持一致和修建自己风格的房屋的做法分别可以带来哪些advantages,这里考生需要站在传统与新兴的大角度,其次利用个人居住舒适度,政府管理等角度来拓展思路。
推荐一个四段式的写法:
There is a debate over housing styles, with some saying newly built houses should have the same decoration as older ones, while others arguing local government should give people freedom to build homes according to their preferences.Both views will be discussed in this essay,followed with my perspectives.
Those supporting architectural conformity present compelling arguments rooted in cultural preservation and aesthetic harmony(给出大论点,有关文化保护和审美和谐). Traditional house styles often embody centuries of local history, reflecting the community's cultural evolution, climate adaptation, and social values(给出传统房屋的优势特点). These architectural elements, whether they be distinctive roof designs, specific building materials, or characteristic facades, serve as physical links to the past, helping maintain the area's unique identity(这些特点有助于形成一个地方的文化特征). Moreover, architectural consistency creates visually cohesive neighborhoods that can enhance property values and attract tourism(对旅游业也有帮助). For instance, historic districts with well-preserved traditional architecture often become cultural landmarks, drawing visitors and fostering community pride. The visual harmony achieved through consistent architectural styles can create a sense of place and belonging that modern, eclectic designs might disrupt.
However, architectural freedom offers equally valid arguments centered on innovation and economic efficiency(新建筑可以体现创新和经济价值). Modern architectural designs often incorporate cutting-edge sustainable technologies and energy-efficient features that traditional styles may struggle to accommodate (to give what is needed to someone)(给出新建筑的特征). Contemporary building techniques can result in homes that are better insulated, more durable, and more environmentally friendly than their traditional counterparts(这些特征相比于老建筑更耐久,环保). Furthermore, the economic advantages of modern construction methods cannot be ignored. Traditional building techniques and materials often come with higher costs and may require specialized craftsmen, making them financially prohibitive (too expensive) for many potential homeowners(仿传统建筑成本高). Allowing flexibility in architectural design can lead to more affordable housing options while encouraging creative solutions to modern living challenges.(允许新建筑的建造有助于创造性发展)
In conclusion, while traditional architecture plays a crucial role in maintaining cultural heritage, allowing flexibility in design can lead to more functional and personalized homes. Therefore, striking a balance between respecting local styles and embracing innovation is the most beneficial approach.
考试建议
1.小作文:重点关注饼图、线图。
2.大作文:重点关注科技,政府类话题。
3.重点浏览2020,2021年考试原题,可借助《**范文书》第8版经典旧题来复习。
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